• @blakestaceyA
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    16 days ago

    Off the top of my head:

    “Quinn entered the dark and cold forest. His knife was dripping blood. He was whistling, off-key.”

    • @blakestaceyA
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      1816 days ago

      "Quinn entered the dark and cold forest. Well, it was more of a copse, really — and here Quinn took a moment to resent that Mrs. Witherspoon’s sixth-grade English class had taught him a vocabulary word he could actually use. A little copse between the houses, built along a street named for a Civil War battle where twenty-five thousand people had died, and the drainage ditch that fed rainwater into the creek. But as forests go, it would have to do. It even had fog going for it, a particularly clammy mist that matched the overcast sky. The mud was frozen beneath his sneakers. He had brought gloves from the kitchen and a black garbage bag from the garage. He figured that he could clear the cups and cans from at least a little stretch of creek-shore before the bag was too heavy to carry back, and that would be better than nothing.

      "At the house, he knew, his parents were still fighting.

      “At least, he thought, they made it to the day after Christmas.”

      • @blakestaceyA
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        1116 days ago

        “Quinn entered the dark and cold forest. It was almost dawn. He was running late. He hoped that his friends had saved him a place. Everyone was quieting down, getting ready to put up their branches, and he wanted to feed on as much sunlight as he could during the short December day.”

        • @blakestaceyA
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          716 days ago

          “Quinn entered the dark and cold forest. Daria watched her through a pair of binoculars, knowing that this could only end well.”

    • Steve
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      1216 days ago

      I spent a good chunk of my 20s obsessed with building a co-writing web platform I called PlotPlant. I really want to riff off what you did here, but I’m scared it will reignite my interest in the project and I’ll just add to the pile of unfinished work