Mike to LinkedinLunatics@sh.itjust.worksEnglish • 7 days agoEvery pub needs a vision statementawful.systemsimagemessage-square22arrow-up1143arrow-down10
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minus-square@Crashumbc@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglish3•7 days agoWhile this is writing, it’s not formal, it’s a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs… It’s meant to be sales speech.
minus-square@sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilink3•7 days agoRight, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.
minus-square@taladar@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilink1•7 days agoI don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.
While this is writing, it’s not formal, it’s a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs… It’s meant to be sales speech.
Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.
I don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.