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MoreWrite · 1 year ago

I toured the future of birth.

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I toured the future of birth.

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MoreWrite · 1 year ago

I Toured the Future of Birth

By Friedrich F Faust

Would love any and all critique.

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Haha. I actually thought the image I put first would be the thumbnail but it wasnt. Thats actually a mistake lmao.

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